Review of mpi-1.3-draft-2008.03.04.pdf
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Comments  by the MPI-1.3 Editor (Rainer Keller)

      OK  = Obvious, typo, correction must be done, ...
            or good idea, correction should be done, ...
      ?   = should be decided by the MPI Forum 
      22  = should be deferred to MPI-2.2.
            It is mainly a suggestion to the content of MPI and not 
            to the merging of MPI-1.1 with MPI-2. 
      Q?  = Question & answer only, no need for corrections 
      -   = Comment, can be ignored 
     *NO* = Correction must or should not be done 

          
Rolf Rabenseifner, HLRS, 9 Mar 2008
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1.1   ..  Titlepage after title: Subtitle "Version 1.3" must be added.

1.2   ..  Copyright: Add "2008" in the list of years.

1.3   ..  193/7 Section title was MPI-1.2: "Version Number"
                and is in MPI 1.3: "Version Inquiries"
                Is this okay? 

1.4   -   205/42 was done according to Protocal Jan. 2008 meeting 
          MPI-21 slide 39. Okay.

1.5   ..  160/42-43 Formatting problem: 
          The space between "communicator" and "." should be removed.

1.6   ..  41/4:  Correct references are 10.2.2 / page 286 / page 289

1.7   ..  60/8:  Correct references are 10.2.2 / page 286 / page 289

1.8   ..  71/27: Correct references are 10.2.2 / page 286 / page 289

1.9   ..  72/25 Formatting problem: A space is too long.
                Maybe, "the the" must be substituted by "the".

1.10  ..  76/42: The MPI-1.2 errata defined at MPI-2.0 29/6-9
                 is not implemented.

1.11  ..  111/26: remove first "jth" on this line.
 
1.12  ..  112/28: remove first "jth" on this line.
 
1.13  ..  119/30: Formatting problem: A space is too long.
 
1.14  ..  197/5:  Formatting problem: A space is too long.
 
1.15  ..  207/29: Formatting problem: A space is too long.

1.16  ..  54/6: "= 0" must be substituted by ".EQ. 0", see Ballot 3, Item 10.

1.17  ..  vi/29: The numbering in the Chapter title "Language Binding"
                 must be "A Language Binding".

1.18  ..  217/3: Numbering "Annex A" is missing.

          All other items from MPI-1.2, Errata page, and Ballot 3 are 
          included (and checked).